Hot Desking

This is the feedback I got from the hot desking exercise where we went around the class and watched each other's music videos and answered their questions.

With this feedback I know I need to make the storyline of the music video more clear which I will do by finishing the filming which shows Katie being stressed in everyday life and then dreaming about being free with her friends. The shakiness and quality of the footage doesn't seem to be a problem so I'm not going to re-film anything from mousehold. Over the next week I'm going to re-film Katie asleep and also film Katie working at her desk getting stressed with work.